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Honorable Mention
Lullaby
Steve Williams

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Your angel night-light glows of latent hope.
Beneath her stained-glass wings your secrets lie,
go potty now and wash your hands with soap.
I kiss a haloed cheek and let you fly.

Inside what constellation will you land?
Will you be horn, bright spear or wistful eye?
I am night sky in which you learn to stand;
through waves of life, my ballast keeps you dry.

My whispered notes of twinkle twinkle sigh,
will childhood bruises fade or paint a scar?
I pray that favored star-dust flurries by,
my little star… I wonder what you are.

Original:

My whispered notes of twinkle twinkle sigh,
your angel night-light glows of latent hope.
I pray that favored star-dust flurries by,
go potty now and wash your hands with soap.

Your glowing angel dreams of latent hope.
Beneath her stained-glass wings your secrets lie,
now shed your clothes and wash your wings with soap.
I kiss a haloed cheek and let you fly.

Beneath my stained-glass dreams your secrets lie,
inside what constellation will you land?
I kiss a haloed cheek and let you fly.
I am night sky in which you learn to stand.

Will childhood bruises fade or paint a scar?
I pray that favored star-dust flurries by,
my little star… I wonder what you are.
My whispered notes of twinkle twinkle sigh.

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